VISUALIZING THE TRANSITION
Before I dive deep into the script shifts, and working on building character, I want to make sure we get this shift of tone just right.
MEDIUM SHOT ALICE, who takes a quick beat, realizing they’re both wasting time on the absurdity. "Phase 3... bla bla bla" Her face shifts from excitement to a more focused, stern look. The dreamy background dissolves, and the office returns to normal. Her tone also sharpens as she says, “Okay, Tomorrow, we're ON.”Cut to both of them in a EXTREME CLOSE UP, eyes locked on each other with a final moment of determination. Alice might give a little smirk, while Greg looks like he’s already calculating the next step.
(in these extreme close ups, they lock eyes and "NOD" at each other).
"PHONE RINGS AT RECEPTIONIST DESK" or a small movement in the office, signaling that tomorrow is when it all goes down. The tension is palpable, but it’s clear now that they’re focused and ready to make it happen.
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