So excited to say that we will be filming our short tomorrow!!!!
MS of the Receptionist: (Hearing the knock) and looking over *whip pan*
CLOSE UP: Feet approaching desk
CLOSE UP: ALICE looking up at TOM (she says her line)
MS: TOM smiles (line cont'd diff angle)
MEDIUM CLOSE UP: Such a pleasure to meet you, is it Alice?
CLOSE UP: ALICE looking up at TOM (she says her line) "yes!"
CLOSE UP: ALICE hand coming out to shake Tom's
CLOSE UP: TOM stressing
MEDIUM CLOSE UP: I... just peed. And I'm not a good hand shaker after a good pee.
CLOSE UP OF ALICE: (capture Alice's reaction)
OTS FROM TOM TO ALICE: (Tom walking away and still capturing Alice's reaction)
SCENE IN THE OFFICE HALLWAY CONT'D
TRACKING SHOT: facing TOM'S back as he's walking...
MEDIUM TRACKING SHOT: Now it's facing Tom, as he bumps into Greg
MEDIUM CLOSE UP: Greg says Line
CLOSE UP OF DANIEL OFFERING HAND:
LOW ANGLE OF TOM AND HAND:
LOW ANGLE SWITCHES TO GREG:
HIGH ANGLE: OF THEM TWO SHOWING SPACE IN BETWEEN
CLOSE UP: GREG: "Uh... Okay... sure...
ALICE TO GREG: "do you have a minute?"
CUT TO THIS
SHOT 1: Closing door
Two person shot: ALICE AND GREG
Greg says: "He did the exact same thing to me..."
Close up shot of ALICE: "I just dont understand why he was so uncomfortable"
CLOSE UP SHOT OF GREG: A plan?
SHOT 2: clicking pen
SHOT 3: Hands slam desk
SHOT 4: Rolling chair moving in
CLOSE UP ALICE: "whaaaat? ..."
CLOSE UP GREG: "It's all about Tom... this week. What's next? Are we swooning over Tom..." (Greg slowly opens the door to reveal Bob from Accounting)
"Bob from accounting makes eye contact then quickly looks away"
Two person shot: GREG: *starts ad libbing*
Two person shot: ALICE "looking side conscious of whether bob is listening" *tries to shush him* that's enough. You're impossible Greg"
ALICE: "Be serious... etc." "Tom is the first guy to walk through that door and refuse a handshake."
EXTREME CLOSE UP GREG: "Oh I know exactly what you mean, Alice"
MEDIUM CLOSE UP: ALICE
SHOT 2: clicking pen
SHOT 3: Hands slam desk
SHOT 4: Rolling chair moving in
(ALT. SHOTS THAT ACTUALLY ARE RELEVANT TO WHAT IS SAID)
"EVERYONE IS GATHERED ROUND THE TABLE, AND THEY'RE DOING SOME SILLY CHOREOGRAPHY THAT IS CULT LIKE"
"Oh Tom, you've gotta shake hands to really be part of the family" For this you have ALICE voiceover, and GREG verbalizing the line.
SHOT: They show TOM giving them a handshake in the vision
NOW THEY'RE IN FRONT OF THE DESKS WITH EXTRAS
GREG: "who wouldn't want to be part of the family?"
(beat).
SHOT OF AYAMI WATCHING THEM: Giving them a look of slight disgust, as if to speak and say "I wouldn't I'm just an intern"
GREG: "even if hes a little paranoid, we've got him"
ALICE: "Slow move in of the camera" "Oh Totally."
TWO PERSON SHOT: "It's Perfect! He won't be able to get out of it. "EVERYONE is doing it..."
VISION: Weird handshake ritual "Oh you don't want to be the odd one out, Tom, do you?" AGAIN, in Alice's voice but verbalized by GREG.
CLOSE UP SHOT: ALICE says "trust me greg it'll work
CLOSE UP SHOT: GREG: "yeah, yeah," WHIP-PAN TO IMAGINATION "What if he refuses to be sucked into the whole team handshake thing?
(as this is being said, include various shots of him refusing)
NOW, they're at the receptionist desk
ALICE: "Oh, I've thought of THAT, honey"
QUICK SHOTS FOR PHASE 2
SHOT 2: clicking pen
SHOT 3: Hands slam desk
SHOT 4: Rolling chair moving in
(ALT. SHOTS THAT ACTUALLY ARE RELEVANT TO WHAT IS SAID)
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